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Team Moon Shade Ch.1

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A little Vulpix was wandering around The Tiny Woods after a rain storm. After stopping for a rest she looked around to see if there was any one to talk to. She stopped on some strange colors on the ground. She ran over to find and eevee.
“Are you ok? Hello? Wake up. Come on wake up!” the vulpix said franticly.
The eevee’s eyes started to open as she found a nose in her face.
“Ah!” she screamed sitting up just to fall back over.
“Yay you’re awake” the vulpix said happily “My name is Flare.”
“Did you just talk” The eevee said confused “I most still be asleep”
Flare: “If you’re still asleep than we’re having the same dream.”
“I know I’m asleep because Vulpixes don’t talk” The eevee said angrily.
Flare: “Well you’re an eevee and you’re talking.”  
“I’m not an eevee! I’m a human … and how can I even under stand you” the eevee said franticly.
“If you think your human go look in the pond over there” Flare pointed it out.
“Fine” the eevee said “Tell me I’m an eevee ha.”
The eevee walked over to the pond and looked in. An eevee was staring back as she stared in aw. “AH!” she said running around tripping over her tail.
“I HAVE A TAIL AND FUR!”  
Flare: “Now that you know you’re an eevee what’s your name?”  
“… Com down… ok … my name is Starlight” she said.
“HELP!”
Flare: “Hum did you here that.”
“HELP! I can’t swim.”
Flare: “It’s coming from the pond.” She said running over there.
In the pond an Oddish was drowning in the water.
“Don’t weary we’ll get you out” Flare said franticly. “Starlight! I need your help.” She said turning to the eevee but there was no one.
Flare: “Starlight….” She said looking for her friend.
She turned to the pond to see starlight in the water diving down to the drowning Oddish.   Flare scanned the water but nothing. She kept looking till finally Starlight came up with the oddish on her back and swam back to the shore.
“Ca cough” the oddish coughed.
“Are you ok” Starlight said almost immediately.
“Yes I’m ok. My name is Su thank you for saving me.”
“Su there you are. Were have you been and how are your friends”
Su: “Mama.”  
“Hello I’m Flare and this is Starlight.”
“My name is Bella.” the bellossom said.
Su: “Mama they saved me from drowning.”
“Drowning oh dear thank you for saving Su hears some thing for your troubles.” and Bella handed them 500 poke.”
Flare: “Thank you but we don’t need a reword.”
“No, no I insist you take it” Bella said as she walked away.
Su: “By.” She said as her and her mother disappeared behind the forest trees.
“Hay Flare. Pelipper gave me a letter for yo… who’s this.” a Pikachu said looking at Starlight.   
Flare: “Huh…. Oh hi Michal and this is Starlight.”
Michal: “Hello. Flare your mother wants you home.”
Flare: “What really. Ok but Michal. Maybe if it’s ok with you Starlight will you make a rescue team with Michal?”
Michal: “She doesn’t have to Flare but you’re a really going rescuer, I saw you rescue that Oddish.” but he was cut off.
Starlight: “You’re leaving but how will I change into a human again and will I see you again.”
Flare: “I don’t know but my Grandpa is smart I’ll ask him than I know I’ll see you again.”
Michal: “What the heck are you two talking about!? You look like an eevee to me.”
Flare: “Starlight do you remember any thing else about being human.” She said ignoring Michal.
Michal: “She’s an eevee!!”
Starlight: “Of cores I d…. no… I don’t.” she said and sat there and thought. “…….. Ok I’ll make a team with you Michal and one day you’ll join to Flare.”
Michal: “What? Really? Wuhu!!” he yelled and some lightning flow past starlight.
Starlight: “Hay!” she yelled.
Michal: “Eheh Sorry.”
Flare: “I promise……… But do you have some where to stay.”
Starlight: “Uh well …. I …. Do yo…….” And she sat there stammering on.
Flare: “I have to go but can you give Starlight a house Michal?”
Michal: “Huh… ya I have a house she can have.”
Flare: “Thank you. Good Buy.” She said walking away.
Michal: “By. See you soon.” He said leading Starlight to Pokemon Square.
Starlight: “Good by Flare.” She said sadly.    
this is the first part of my pokemon mystery dungeon team's story hope you like it
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It's pretty good =3

Just make sure to check for spelling mistakes, and work on your grammar a bit =3